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Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, 13 November 2019

Colour Poem

For writing today me and my class looked at colour poem. Colour poem is a poem you write about your favorite colour. Here is my colour poem. I hope you enjoy.  



I am Poem

For writing this week my class and I looked at writing a poem. We wrote poems about our-self and had to express our feelings in our writing. Here is my I am me poem. 

I AM 

I am a girl No less than a pearl
I wonder why I am never good enough in this world
I see myself crying into tears wanting to give up already.
I want this journey of pain to stop
I hear the inspirational words come out of my mother's mouth that I try to fulfill, but I never do
I am a girl No less than a pearl

I pretend that there's no reason to hate life, no reason to let it win. But the truth is that I do hate life and I'm tempted to give in.
I touch the painful bruises on my skin 
I worry that people will no longer want me in their lives
I cry for help to be on its way
I am a girl No less than a pearl

I understand why life isn’t always easy 
I say Father, forgive these people and forgive me for what I have done wrong
I dream to go back in time and take away my sad moments
I try to understand the purpose of life 
I hope that my parents will accept and appreciate me for who I am  
I am a girl No less than a pearl

Thursday, 17 October 2019

Quick Write(Writing)

For one of my writing activities this week. I had to write a story about an image I looked at and create a writing piece out of it. Here is my Quick Write. 



Tuesday, 3 September 2019

Galaxy Brochure

This brochure I made was an activity that was similar to making a newspaper article but different. I made a brochure and put information about the galaxy and activity's I will do when I go to the galaxy. Here is what I did. I hope you enjoy. 


Tuesday, 6 August 2019

Photoshop

For writing this week. My teacher challenged me and my friends to see how many photos we can take in the time-limited that she gave us with the things she wanted us to take pictures of. We managed to get some done but not all of them. Here is what we did. Enjoy

Friday, 16 November 2018

Ow-liver Twist

Today for Quick write I wrote about a Ow-liver Twist. I just looked at the picture and wrote about what I thought about it. Here is what I have done. Hope you enjoy.


Tuesday, 23 October 2018

Integrity Online

This week for PB4L we learnt about Integrity online. Here is my work about integrity. Hope you enjoy.  



Monday, 3 September 2018

Imperative verbs poster!

For writing This week I have been Learning about Imperative verbs.! Here is what I have learnt about Imperative verbs.

Saturday, 28 July 2018

Slime making

For writing today I and some of my classroom mates did a Screencastify for slime. We had to write a script of slime and video ourselves saying our script. Here is the video we hope you enjoy.



Tuesday, 19 June 2018

My imaginary monster

For writing this week I had to imagine that I had a pet monster and write and describe how he looks. Here is my monster.  Hope you enjoy

Meet my monster is called Samantha Bob Marley Ahokava Huch. Samantha Bob Marley Ahokava Huch has long brown hair that covers his face and wears a brown purple grass skrit.
Her tail is fluffy and short like my sisters hair Lesieli. She flicks her tail up and down and it makes me giggle.

She has great extended pink bloody spots around her face and also have chubby cheeks like a panda bear. She is 3 foot tall and weighs 36 pounds. She has amazing shiny purple sharp teeth. She has a sloppy long bright pink wet tongue poking out of her mouth.

She lives in my closet door next to my bed, In winter time I'll always hear her snoring loud like a pig. Sometimes I run to my parents like at 4 in the morning because I am terrified like someone was in my house. She can go and sneak under my bed to find old stinky socks. She can chew super slow like a turtle and it sometimes gives me goose bumps. My monster Samantha Bob Marley Ahokava Huch is my only one true best friend in the whole wide world. The END ......


Thursday, 31 May 2018

My mate is a hero!

For writing this week we had to write about a story and describe about a imaginary hero that saved our lives. Here is my writing. Hope you enjoy.

My mate is a hero!

My mate Clark, has brown curly bushy hair. He has light blue eyes and chubby cheeks. He is a generous man and also a life saver. One day I got a call from Clark and said that he was going to fight against thee evil people that wanted to destroy our city and asked if I wanted to help him and his other mates. Then I said sure why not.

When the evil people entered the city there were many huge and strong people, then they started charging towards us and we ran and hid and tried to fight. When I was trying to fight them I got shot in the leg and blood ran down my leg and I couldn't even move a thing. Then suddenly Clark appeared in a helicopter and saved my life from dying. Then I told him thank you very much for saving my life.

When we were in the helicopter he said that I wasn't able to fight anymore cause I was injured then I just respected what he said. When I arrived home my mum and sister took me to the hospital and looked after me while my friend was going back to fight and save peoples lives.
When I was able to go back home and rest I was able to contact him again.

When my mum came back from work and looked in the mailbox she saw a letter from Clark’s parent and she gave it to me and I read it out loud. Then suddenly the sentence that I read strikes me and I felt so sad that the person that saved my life have passed away and has gone to a safe place.

As soon I read the letter I wanted to contact Clark's parents and tell them how much Clark done for my life. When I rang up Clark's parents and told them about him, we were poured with tears on our faces. We can’t forget how much Clark has done for me and his family and how he was a good fighter.

The END

Thursday, 17 May 2018

Writing is GOLD

This week with Ms Wrack we had started to find ways how to write and why we need to read our writing. She taught us that our is gold we have to read our write like its GOLD and write like its gold. Here is my piece of writing. 

I felt the freezing cold water crash between my legs
Image result for GOLDI saw soldiers charging towards a safe place to save their lives
I heard intense piercing gun shots passing my ear and heading towards the air.
I felt my chest pounding so momentary like it never happened in my life.
I saw bullets sticking out from my friends deformed body 
I heard soldiers scream in a displeasing way. 
I smelt gun smoke coming behind me almost about to destroy my lungs.
I tasted the salt water coming from the ocean and about to give me a heart attack 

Monday, 19 March 2018

The Zirka circus

On Saturday I and my Young sister and older sister and her husband went to the circus. Here is my story. Hope you enjoy. 

One day on a Saturday evening I and my little sister and my older sister and her husband planed to go to the Zirka circus. We got ready and of we went to the circus. When we got there their was a food store and heaps of people. After a few minutes the show started. It was amazing their was little kids my age and adults too. After the first hour was finish we had to wait there for 15 min till the second hour started. When the 15 min was over the second hour started. There was heaps of magic tricks. When the show ended we went somewhere to eat. I wish I could go to the circus again. 

Friday, 16 March 2018

Survival of the FUNKIEST!


My Story called the survival of the FUNKIEST.

Who: Max Stone, David Dazzle, Jazzy Razz, Mrs What-a-Shocker and Ruby Jones.

Where: In school time.

What: He would always move around and his writing and reading would be ghastly

Why: Because he hated school.

When: In the morning at assembley.

Max Stone hated school. It was boring for him. He would always fidget and make silly sounds. Max had a partner her name was Ruby. Max would  always do things with Ruby. But one morning Max and his partner Ruby didn't know that they had won a place on the Brain show. Max learnt again that brains work in many different and interesting ways!

Would I read this book again? Yes I would want to read this book again because it show how you can do anything if you believe in it.
Would you guys want to read this book?
What I like about this book was the faith and strength Max and Ruby had. They now will always remember that brains work in many different ways!

Thursday, 21 December 2017

Settlers come to New Zealand (summer learning journey)

For my second activity for week one was looking at settlers come to New Zealand. I had to ready a short story and write a letter to my friend and imagining that I was on one of the wakas. Here is my letter and a story about how I felt when I was on the wakas. Hope you enjoy.




Dear Tracey I am writing to you in my waka I and my family is now travailing thousands of miles to New Zealand. Me and my sister are having fun touching the water and also liking the view on the waka. As I and my family in this waka I kind of feel a little sad and happy moving to another country  at the same time because I am travailing far away from my usual home but I feel happy too that I get to see new places when I go to New Zealand.By Moni:)

Tuesday, 21 November 2017

World War 1!

In our classroom, we have been looking at wars. We looked at world war 1 we watched a movie then we had to write a recount and pretend that we were in the war. Here is my recount about World War 1. Hope you enjoy!