My mate is a hero!

For writing this week we had to write about a story and describe about a imaginary hero that saved our lives. Here is my writing. Hope you enjoy.

My mate is a hero!

My mate Clark, has brown curly bushy hair. He has light blue eyes and chubby cheeks. He is a generous man and also a life saver. One day I got a call from Clark and said that he was going to fight against thee evil people that wanted to destroy our city and asked if I wanted to help him and his other mates. Then I said sure why not.

When the evil people entered the city there were many huge and strong people, then they started charging towards us and we ran and hid and tried to fight. When I was trying to fight them I got shot in the leg and blood ran down my leg and I couldn't even move a thing. Then suddenly Clark appeared in a helicopter and saved my life from dying. Then I told him thank you very much for saving my life.

When we were in the helicopter he said that I wasn't able to fight anymore cause I was injured then I just respected what he said. When I arrived home my mum and sister took me to the hospital and looked after me while my friend was going back to fight and save peoples lives.

When I was able to go back home and rest I was able to contact him again.

When my mum came back from work and looked in the mailbox she saw a letter from Clark’s parent and she gave it to me and I read it out loud. Then suddenly the sentence that I read strikes me and I felt so sad that the person that saved my life have passed away and has gone to a safe place.

As soon I read the letter I wanted to contact Clark's parents and tell them how much Clark done for my life. When I rang up Clark's parents and told them about him, we were poured with tears on our faces. We can’t forget how much Clark has done for me and his family and how he was a good fighter.

The END

Writing is GOLD

This week with Ms Wrack we had started to find ways how to write and why we need to read our writing. She taught us that our is gold we have to read our write like its GOLD and write like its gold. Here is my piece of writing. 

I felt the freezing cold water crash between my legs

I saw soldiers charging towards a safe place to save their lives

I heard intense piercing gun shots passing my ear and heading towards the air.

I felt my chest pounding so momentary like it never happened in my life.

I saw bullets sticking out from my friends deformed body 

I heard soldiers scream in a displeasing way. 

I smelt gun smoke coming behind me almost about to destroy my lungs.

I tasted the salt water coming from the ocean and about to give me a heart attack 

Malo e lelei, Kia Ora and Aloha my name is Moni and I am a learner at
Glen Taylor School who loves to learn and help others especially
my 2 teacher’s Mrs faalili and Whaea Pene. I am Tongan and Samoan.
I have seven members in my family. This year I am looking forward to
becoming a great role models to younger kids and a stronger year 7.
At school I really enjoy learning, and P.E and playing basketball with my friends.
I also enjoy trying new challenges and trying things I haven't done before.

Anzac Peek

For ANZAC day we had to write a story about this Image. Here is my story. Hope you enjoy. 

As I walk on sidewalk on a beautiful fine dazzling clear morning, with a smile on my face. Sprinting towards the bright red poppies,remembering those who fought to save our country. While I am walking I have a look down and see the remarkable sparkling ocean. I tilted my head and jogged a little to the left and saw the spectacular view from the rough stony sidewalk of the cliff.