My mate is a hero!

For writing this week we had to write about a story and describe about a imaginary hero that saved our lives. Here is my writing. Hope you enjoy.

My mate is a hero!

My mate Clark, has brown curly bushy hair. He has light blue eyes and chubby cheeks. He is a generous man and also a life saver. One day I got a call from Clark and said that he was going to fight against thee evil people that wanted to destroy our city and asked if I wanted to help him and his other mates. Then I said sure why not.

When the evil people entered the city there were many huge and strong people, then they started charging towards us and we ran and hid and tried to fight. When I was trying to fight them I got shot in the leg and blood ran down my leg and I couldn't even move a thing. Then suddenly Clark appeared in a helicopter and saved my life from dying. Then I told him thank you very much for saving my life.

When we were in the helicopter he said that I wasn't able to fight anymore cause I was injured then I just respected what he said. When I arrived home my mum and sister took me to the hospital and looked after me while my friend was going back to fight and save peoples lives.

When I was able to go back home and rest I was able to contact him again.

When my mum came back from work and looked in the mailbox she saw a letter from Clark’s parent and she gave it to me and I read it out loud. Then suddenly the sentence that I read strikes me and I felt so sad that the person that saved my life have passed away and has gone to a safe place.

As soon I read the letter I wanted to contact Clark's parents and tell them how much Clark done for my life. When I rang up Clark's parents and told them about him, we were poured with tears on our faces. We can’t forget how much Clark has done for me and his family and how he was a good fighter.

The END

Writing is GOLD

This week with Ms Wrack we had started to find ways how to write and why we need to read our writing. She taught us that our is gold we have to read our write like its GOLD and write like its gold. Here is my piece of writing. 

I felt the freezing cold water crash between my legs

I saw soldiers charging towards a safe place to save their lives

I heard intense piercing gun shots passing my ear and heading towards the air.

I felt my chest pounding so momentary like it never happened in my life.

I saw bullets sticking out from my friends deformed body 

I heard soldiers scream in a displeasing way. 

I smelt gun smoke coming behind me almost about to destroy my lungs.

I tasted the salt water coming from the ocean and about to give me a heart attack 

Malo e lelei, Kia Ora and Aloha my name is Moni and I am a learner at
Glen Taylor School who loves to learn and help others especially
my 2 teacher’s Mrs faalili and Whaea Pene. I am Tongan and Samoan.
I have seven members in my family. This year I am looking forward to
becoming a great role models to younger kids and a stronger year 7.
At school I really enjoy learning, and P.E and playing basketball with my friends.
I also enjoy trying new challenges and trying things I haven't done before.

Anzac Peek

For ANZAC day we had to write a story about this Image. Here is my story. Hope you enjoy. 

As I walk on sidewalk on a beautiful fine dazzling clear morning, with a smile on my face. Sprinting towards the bright red poppies,remembering those who fought to save our country. While I am walking I have a look down and see the remarkable sparkling ocean. I tilted my head and jogged a little to the left and saw the spectacular view from the rough stony sidewalk of the cliff.

The Prediction on what might happen on Friday.

On Friday the 13th I think our school is going to have a fun house caption day. Like we are gonna come in our house team color ad play games in our group and also have a water slide. There might be a sausage sizzle and a ice-blocks.  We will might not even do any work if that day is sunny because our teacher says it's the last day of the term. They might sale the Ice-blocks for $1.00 and the sausage sizzle for $1.00 to. They might even sale the water for cheap like 50 cents. 

The Zirka circus

On Saturday I and my Young sister and older sister and her husband went to the circus. Here is my story. Hope you enjoy. 

One day on a Saturday evening I and my little sister and my older sister and her husband planed to go to the Zirka circus. We got ready and of we went to the circus. When we got there their was a food store and heaps of people. After a few minutes the show started. It was amazing their was little kids my age and adults too. After the first hour was finish we had to wait there for 15 min till the second hour started. When the 15 min was over the second hour started. There was heaps of magic tricks. When the show ended we went somewhere to eat. I wish I could go to the circus again. 

Survival of the FUNKIEST!

My Story called the survival of the FUNKIEST.

Who: Max Stone, David Dazzle, Jazzy Razz, Mrs What-a-Shocker and Ruby Jones.

Where: In school time.

What: He would always move around and his writing and reading would be ghastly

Why: Because he hated school.

When: In the morning at assembley.

Max Stone hated school. It was boring for him. He would always fidget and make silly sounds. Max had a partner her name was Ruby. Max would  always do things with Ruby. But one morning Max and his partner Ruby didn't know that they had won a place on the Brain show. Max learnt again that brains work in many different and interesting ways!

Would I read this book again? Yes I would want to read this book again because it show how you can do anything if you believe in it.
Would you guys want to read this book?
What I like about this book was the faith and strength Max and Ruby had. They now will always remember that brains work in many different ways!